Brighter Both
Far away, out on the horizon
into the calm sea.
I saw the reddish sun
Setting down in the mist.
Dull sunshine; gloomy hue
worn out, Lost in the sea.
…
Pebbles and a soul,
lying on the same shore.
Shades of evening, few birds
Heartbeat plopped into the sea.
Sand dunes,
cheek and the warm tears,
washed away by the gentle wave.
On opposite side of the sea
Same story repeated.
…
Next morning
Brighter both
Moved the world.
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Very nice. Into the gloom… red eyes…
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This is so lovely. “Pebbles and soul lying on the same shore.” I love that image.
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A beautiful piece. Your expressionism is profound. Made for an immersive read.
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This is just amazing. Loved it.
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